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Is this a good poem? Trustful comments, please?

All these feelings I have for you
Are feelings that I can??t explain.
The way you hold my hand,
The way you kiss me,
The way you make me laugh,
The way you make me smile,
Are the ways that you make me feel like me.
I feel like myself when I??m around you.
No one else can make me feel like this.
I can??t let you go
Because you??re the best thing that ever happen to me.
No one else holds my hand like you do,
No one else kisses me like you do,
No one else makes me laugh like you do,
No one else makes me smile like you do
And gives me the amazing felling that you give me
When I??m around you.
All you need to do is look at me
And the feeling I get is outstanding.
If we break up when I??m not ready to,
Things will never be the same.
My life will go down here from there.
I trust you with my heart
And if you break it,
The side that no one else saw of me,
Will be flushed down the toilet,
And you will miss the way I used to be.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: aww, it's good :) i like it!