Bringing it to class tommorrow?

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Bringing it to class tommorrow?

its cheesy but please read! i need it for extra points in design class here it goes!(it doesnt rhym i know!)

This thought
The thought of thinking it surprised me!
It haunted and taunted me
It choocked and broke me inside
All day I was left in no peace
With this thing thing that took control of me
I could never let it go
Never shall I give in
For I do not know what tommorow will bring
Maybe I should talk,its best if I say
Or maybe I should keep quiet
Today is just not the day
Now people can see
They see what im thinking
Now I believe theres no point to disagree
I wake up the next day
I look over my shoulder and see his face
He opens his eyes and for the first time
My lips say"I love you Roberto"
And he replies "I love you to"
oh how soon it bloomed......

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: awww that was so Great!!! U are very creative, u r a natural.. I have only one suggestion, in the last part, when u say:
He opens his eyes and for the first time
My lips say"I love you Roberto", U SHOULD DO IT LIKE THIS:
He opens his eyes and for the first time
My lips say"I love you", without the "Roberto" cuz it sounds more misterious.. nobody knows who u love...
u should really consider writing poetry, though
gud luck :D