Just something I had to write. Your thoughts?

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Just something I had to write. Your thoughts?

I just found the poetry section of Yahoo Answers and figured I'd post this.

I was once asked to write a short poem about what "dream" meant to me. I came up with this.

The Successful Ones

The Successful Ones, through their own eyes,
now looking back in retrospect,
To Dream was not to fantasize,
but to them was To Expect

It's really my life philosophy. Simple.

Any thoughts on the poem or the idea?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think you have a talent there! I'm not much into poetry but I like the message,and it's original!!

Pretty Good