Question:
Feed back on my new poem?
Angels
by Kaylin Mae
dedicated to the memories of Joan Duncan and Martin Douglass
Smash.
Hit.
Crash.
Crushed between tons of twisted metal.
and the cold decrypted concrete.
The lovers lie.
Star crossed perhaps.
While their hearts unable to beat.
the love still exists.
inside the chests of angles.
who watch the scene from above.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It reminds me of the 50's song "Teen Angel"