Here'sa random verse from a poem I wrote about a year ago.?

Question:

Here'sa random verse from a poem I wrote about a year ago.?

Bow down, there's a reason you're laughing.
I can see it deep in your eyes,
and the wind whispers to me, and tells me of a theme,
where i'm laughing and critisizing you, too.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That's good. I connected with it. I really respect short poems that make a big impact. Nice work.