Another poem to be published! I am on fire! Tell me what you think...?

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Another poem to be published! I am on fire! Tell me what you think...?

Phone Numbers of Exes.........by Jason Entrigardida

(555)333-1010, 1023
(555)654-2111, 505-1219
(312), (614)---notches on posts=almost

(555)892-1217
(555)315-6722, 6789, 3390
Danger, danger, I called a stranger
Another ring, another fling

Numbers numbers, I need seven
Tommy Tutone heaven
867-5309, 555, ring me all the time

(555)610-2222, Girrrrl

th'end

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wow! Read it aloud three times. Very original, finding such rhythm and structure with phone numbers, and that last line works so well.

I take it all back. Don't revise this one!