What do you think of this poem???

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What do you think of this poem???

as i lie awake in fright, i think of what you said that night, i thought of you and of that night, before you and i began to fight, as i lie in my bed i close my eyes and rest my head, as i lie awake in fright i write whats on my heart that night, as i lie awake in fright when i think of you the moon shines bright.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like it...it can be improved a bit more...but i think its a nice poem...i like how you made it repetitive...catches the readers attention...good job...just work on the ending, looks like you rushed thru it...but other than that, great work!