Another ecstatic poem - what do you think?

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Another ecstatic poem - what do you think?

The night is cold, my flesh is chilled;
Come to me, oh Bright One
Warm me with Your light.
I lie in wait for Your presance,
Your servant aches for You.

Cinna waits patiently for the Bright One.

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6 days ago
Grr ... I think I misspelled presence. Curses!

6 days ago
This is in the style of Mirabai, the Hindu mystic poet priestess of the 1500's so forgive me if it doesn't fit with today's standars of poetry.

6 days ago
It's not meant to be overtly erotic. Mirabai wrote her poems to her god, Hari Krishna ...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 6 days ago
Grr ... I think I misspelled presence. Curses!