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Hey, I need help on the finishing lines to this poem. You think it's ok, or should i change it?

Everywhere I look you seem to be there.
Every which, way, when or where
I see you in my head so clearly
but i know my hearts decieving me
I look for you through out my mind
But you know your not that hard to find
I know i'm falling endlessly
I just hope you'll be there to catch me


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That is a good poem. I don't think you should change it- it is good the way it is. I don't think it needs anymore- it is soo deep by itself... well, if you do add anything, it will still be a pretty poem.