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Question:

OK this is for someone Very Special. Comments very welcome.>??????

passion

See my heart? I'm on my knees,
I think I'm broken again.
See my heart? I'm on my knees
I know I'm broken again.

Let it go to God,
What becomes of us?
Let it bleed to God,
Let it all run dry.

Cold and unhappy,
Kiss my falling tears.
Falling from my soul,
Drag yourself away.

Start by letting me in,
To look into your face.
Harder than you've known,
I need to be alone.

Lift yourself off that shelf,
And if you bleed, it's justified.
We sacrifice, we sacrifice,
Til it blows up in our face.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Bloody brilliant poem!! Ignore the people who tell you otherwise!! You're a wonderful writer and your poems are lovely! You have a lot of talent and I envy you! <3
It's a bit confusing, but you know what you meant and what you wanted to say! So what over people say shouldn't matter. As long as you think it's great, it is!!
Love the poem!!!! <3<3<3

~Mystic~^-^