Opinions on my poem 'Never,' pls?

Question:

Opinions on my poem 'Never,' pls?

My songs you've never read
The poetry lines you've never said
Out loud for me, what you haven't found
Out about me, you've not uttered any gentle sound

For me to hear
The poems I wrote for you I now tear
Apart and throw away
Giving up hope of you ever noticing me one day

One day you'll regret all you haven't done
For me, when I shall from your life be gone
You'll stare alone in the desert sun
Never catching up with me no matter how fast you'll run

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Thematically nice but consider using a similar number of consonants in your lines and assonance instead of simple end rhyme.
Check out some Shakespeare sonnets.