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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> 'The Trap' - ok, how silly is this poem?Question: 'The Trap' - ok, how silly is this poem?For so many years Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Gupil, I like this one. I do. You may want to look at this line, the syntax seemed clunky: Fall myself into this And "it's" seems wrong--switching from there's to it's is jarring in the below example. It seems to me there??s something Then it seems to me it??s not Again, I do think the poem is good. |