What do you think about my poem, 'Of both heaven and hell desire'?

Question:

What do you think about my poem, 'Of both heaven and hell desire'?

I saw you abandoned by her, you were almost dead
My sweet poison of seduction tangling you in appealing illusions
Into throwing her away out of your lover's soul
Yet you were calling her name lying in your pains in hell
My place is not in heaven, since I was killed in front of those gates
I am a creature of the dark, a veiled angel, here we will dwell
She is your past, forget her, I am the eternal present
I am immortal, dark angel of hell's fire
I carved for you what I knew best and let you do the rest
And yet you were doing your own game
You wished to get me, and so you used her name
My feelings to awaken, my eyes to look with lust at you

Love is a crazy, deluded game, fire
Of both heaven and hell, desire

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: wow....
what more can I say? you are SO amazing. every time I read something of yours, I just want more.