Hey tell me what you think please....?

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Hey tell me what you think please....?

Everlasting Bond

It started with I do,
Even though others said 'They Wont'
Bound with the words I love you,
while some said, 'no you don't'
Out side another day,Nothing special to see,
but inside the heart, something new....
A joy that was set free.
An everlasting embrace,
makes a pounding in the chest,
While your eyes meet,
and tell each other,
"your the best."
You grow old together later,
Getting wiser was a must,
while ignoring words like "wont and dont"
And just giving it all your trust.
Then one day the one who loved you, who came
into this world is gone.
But dear to your heart, and no more your eyes,
Still lies the everlasting bond.

Additional Details

5 days ago
actually it is in a poem book, along with 4 more of my poems that can be found on Poetry.com under the poet name section...if you wanna know my name or anymore so you can read more, just e-mail me.... greyravenwolfe@yahoo.com

5 days ago
actually I write in the spur of the moment..I did this poem about 3 years ago, and it's in a book called Sentiments From the Heart......it just comes natural to me, and again all my poems are on poetry.com...and all of them are copyrighted as well.

5 days ago
actually I'm divorced, and my ex spouse is very much alive....it was just a random poem I did...lol. i'm only 24, I hope I don't die soon....I still have art projects to finish, my book i'm writing, and my music!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 5 days ago
actually it is in a poem book, along with 4 more of my poems that can be found on Poetry.com under the poet name section...if you wanna know my name or anymore so you can read more, just e-mail me.... greyravenwolfe@yahoo.com