Do you like my new poem?

Question:

Do you like my new poem?

Spin around
Dancing white gown
Petticoat promenade
Winds me around a dancing white gown
White ribboned hair
Brushes cheeks with breeze
Perfumed skin permeates
Air breathed in heavily
Whirls me around her dancing white gown
A touch of her hand
Softly, slowly captures me
The chill up her arm
Enraptures me
While turning around with dancing white gown

Additional Details

4 days ago
I took out the breaks
My bad

4 days ago
This is a poetic adaptation of "Cajun Love Song" by Leon Russell.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 4 days ago
I took out the breaks
My bad