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Miscellaneous type poem I wrote few months ago :)?

Endless Rain



It pours on me
Endlessly...

You left a puddle
The day you walked out my life
Leaving the worst storm-
No weatherman can predict

Knee-high-boots & raincoat
Still keep me wet
No umbrella high
Or large enough,
Can protect me

Loneliness has been my priority
For introducing myself to the Sun
Is no longer necessary

When you walked out that door
Your last appearance
Was the only glow
I've ever needed

The rain has become a fascination
For it understands my pain
It cries like I do
And never ends

It pours on me
Endlessly...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Hey, that was refreshing!!! Very genuine and unique, I haven't read many poems liek that at all; I commend you, definitely!

I liek the never-ending idea of the rain, or the sorrow. You know, this is a rather intelligent poem and there aren't many of those around here (or much in modern poetry) so congrats to you, way to go!!

Keep writing, absolutely!!!!

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