HeLP mE wITh mY stoRY?

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HeLP mE wITh mY stoRY?

I'm reading lately and I enjoy It. It made me try and write my own book but obviously It's going to be hard. I'm only 14 and I started writing something called Stalker so don't expect it to be good. I'm putting it up here because i know it's bad and i need help with it. I only have one plot in it so it wont get far can ye help me try and get like 3 plots in it and just basically help i don't know how to go any further.

(Don't answer until i have the story in add details might take a little while)

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2 weeks ago
Did you ever get the feeling someone??s watching you. I do. It??s so weird I can??t go no where without looking left to right to back and forward, circling around myself every 5 minutes. I tried to explain it to Mom and Dad but they just said I was paranoid living in the city now, and on top of that my older sister laughs at me and when ever she sees me exploring the city she always passes me and says I??m watching you and laughs. I always know it??s her only a witch would laugh like that. It happens in school as well but I feel safe in school maybe I need some friends. I??ve always tried but no luck. I don??t like the same sports as them and I absolutely hate soccer the main sport the play it gets on my nerves so boring. They think what kind of kid doesn??t like soccer the weirdo and I know they do so I stopped attempting to make friends. Maybe someone??s pointing a gun at me and thinking of whens the perfect time to shoot.

2 weeks ago
I don??t think they??ll be a perfect time I always make sure that I??m around a lot of people for safety reasons. But it??s gotten worse over the last 3 months I??ve been here. I??m way more paranoid then ever, some days I feel like he??s right next to me about to grab me or even on top of a building and about to pull the trigger so I??d run home screaming my heart out. Then when I was in my local shop buying some coke and popcorn I bumped into someone and I felt like that one was the watcher. I roared screaming in the shop he??s here he??s here to get me, help, help, HELP.

2 weeks ago
The shopkeeper rang the police and told me sit still it??s alright. Next thing I know I??m at the police station being tugged at and again I scream. But im comforted at the sound of my parent??s voice calming me repeating it??s alright. Never im my life have I been so afraid I could literally say I felt my heart trying to escape thumping at my chest. There were two guards and we were in a small room. We were sitting at opposite sides of the table to the guards. They were asking what was wrong and I said I was being watched. They said by who and I said the person at the shop. What person they said and I said I don??t know. They finally talked to my parents and then we got in our car and left for home. I went straight to bed and hoped that I??d fall asleep. I closed my eyes and waited.

2 weeks ago
Nothing, I felt tired but my body wouldn??t give into it all it gave into was fear. I remembered I??d forgotten to brush my teeth so I got up and went to the bathroom cleansed myself and yet again hoped I??d fall asleep. I closed my eyes and looked straight into the darkness hoping my body would give into it and id fall asleep. Non-stop tossing and turning if it wasn??t for my parents still being awake I??d be shaking right now. Next thing I know my eyes open up and it??s still dark I look to my left and see the clock. I had to cancel out c) so I checked my parent??s rooms both fast asleep. C) There??s someone here in my house creeping around it. 3.15am I??ve fallen asleep but woken up again. I stop breathing temporally and listen all around the house. There are creaks but that could be a) my parents or b) just an old house with creaks. Mom did say that it was newly built so that made me think of c) the watcher.

2 weeks ago
O.K I realise it's a bit too long this because I'd have to add details like 15 more times. So basically It's about a kid who's feeling stalked and then he freaks out so they get him a dog. oh and he's like a loner no one likes him. after the dog hes so happy for ages then he dies and theres a threat for the parents and telling the boy he can never be happy. after that they move away and he gets friends and everything is happy again until...... i need help there

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 2 weeks ago
Did you ever get the feeling someone??s watching you. I do. It??s so weird I can??t go no where without looking left to right to back and forward, circling around myself every 5 minutes. I tried to explain it to Mom and Dad but they just said I was paranoid living in the city now, and on top of that my older sister laughs at me and when ever she sees me exploring the city she always passes me and says I??m watching you and laughs. I always know it??s her only a witch would laugh like that. It happens in school as well but I feel safe in school maybe I need some friends. I??ve always tried but no luck. I don??t like the same sports as them and I absolutely hate soccer the main sport the play it gets on my nerves so boring. They think what kind of kid doesn??t like soccer the weirdo and I know they do so I stopped attempting to make friends. Maybe someone??s pointing a gun at me and thinking of whens the perfect time to shoot.